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Ha! Lovin' that.

Dude, I honastly have to let you know that's the hardest I've ever laughed at an animation today. That was great. I love simple random shorts like that. Awesome work!

Ha!

I doubt anything has made me laugh harder today. I love lost in translation jokes like that.

Funny shiza

Is it me or did the boss sound a lot like the guy from Office Space. Nice work--funny naked chicks. It's a shame the main character died. I would have liked to see some character development, so that way it wouldn't seem like you took the easy way out by killing him off. It's a funny short still.

Good stuff

I really like your animating style--it reminds me of Home Movie's Squigglevision. Your color palette is great. Interesting subject matter--you really made the song your own.

Not surprised, but still shocked.

I'm really happy with how much you've improved since you started! Very nicely done all around. I'll assess this the best that I can but what changes you still need to make are minor at best.

+I loved the easing of the motion--very smooth and very subtle.
++++I loved the fact that the mustache hairs moved as they spoke. Great attention to detail.

+Nice shadows and and lighting effects--I'm interested in how you pulled off your blurs with your version of flash.

? Are you characters purposely 2D? Seeing that I've never seen a side profile, I'm noticing a parappa the rapper trend with the way they move. It's a fine style in it's own right. I'm just honestly wondering.

+ Much longer than your usual animations--you pulled it off quite well. The scenes were well planned out and executed well. I liked the slight joke at the end too.

+/- Blood and guts? That surprised me--that's certainly a new way of animating them too. I've never tried it that way before and it gives me some ideas.

Peoples Court = Random

And I loved the monkey too--and the sneak in Su-Fi was a great add in.

The animation is nice all around, there's nothing that I could possibly point out anymore. You're really a great animator. Nothing more I can do but pat you on the back.

I don't know, I thought this was funny

+Funny and certainly interesting. You made me laugh out loud.

-No animation.

Overall:

Although I found this hilarious, a video like this would do much more justice on youtube than Newgrounds.

HyperRaider responds:

Hardly anyone will watch it on youtube.
But thanks for the advice ;)

Very Professional

+Nice character models. They're very stylistic.

-The sound took too long to fade in.

+/-Voice acting was nice, natural, and very conversational, but very hard to hear over the background mummers. In the end, it came off as distracting more than anything else. I suggest optimizing the audio a bit more.

+I'm glad that the doctor didn't mistakingly eat the foreskin. The ending was really original!

+/-You're style of animation would look much more smooth if you tweened most of the facial expressions rather than position them in a frame by frame manner. It really comes off as jerky.

I liked the credits, and the subduded nature of the animation. It was very calming and sweet at the same time.

Hmmm... Decent.

+You're really great at easing tweened motion.

+Nicely pieced together music video.

-The animation, for what it was, went on for just a bit too long. It seemed like that man was eitehr giong to be eaten or continue to run forever. It soon came to the point where I was getting bored at the end. I suggest that you edit the music to make it shorter before animating the entire song.

+I liked the fact that you used custom sprites! Nice background loops as well.

-Sound effects could have gone a long way. Classic video game animations just don't feel the same without them.

Nicely done. The animation is very solid--and pretty decent. I don't get the impression that you were really aiming for anything higher than that.

Timing is everything really...

-There's more detail in the preloader than the actual animation. I suggest putting more graphics-wise effort into the cartoon.

-Scenes that weren't animated at all stayed on the screen for just too long. You may want to shave a few seconds from them.

-Why do I have to hit play twice to see on animation? The preloader's prompt should automatically start the main portion of the animation.

+I did think it was kinda funny. But poor timing and animation really took away from the punchline.

Really good stuff.

+ I really liked the effects that went into particular scenes including Bill's demonic transformation.

+It was also well written.

-I suggest that you improve the audio quality voice overs. In certain parts of the animation, it was hard to determine what was said over the bad quality. It sounded like you had used a Noise Filter on a very high setting to be specific.

-Don't put warnings about the movie in the preloader. You should fix any problems you may think you have with the animation before you submit it.

-Certain parts of the animation weren't animated as well as they could have been. For example, Bill's walking loops were poor--especially the loop where he's walking away with his back to the camera. Moreover, the sun in the introduction of the flash should have slowly panned to the right rather than remaining static in the frame. The shaving scene was a nice touch, but foam was being removed in places that weren't even being shaved. It good to see that there wasn't one glaring error, but a collection of small ones is often times just as bad.

+Very nice character sketches. None of the characters looked alike and they each had their own personality. But you may want to be wary that Bill does not become a parallel of Homer Simpson.

+The crap scene was enjoyably disturbing.

Overall, this is an excellent animation, which shows a lot of effort and potential. The animation seems heavily influenced by The Simpsons and Family Guy, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I urge you to really use your talents to make Bill's Adventures your own unique work.

Psychotic-Dan responds:

Thanks for the contructive critasicm, im always happy to hear how i can improve, rather than how much i sucked.

I only read 10 reviews. xD If you have a honest issue about my work, you're taking me too seriously.

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