Wonderful!
This is just the flash I needed to see today! You've made my day.
--an excellent stylistic work brimming with originality.
Wonderful!
This is just the flash I needed to see today! You've made my day.
--an excellent stylistic work brimming with originality.
Be sure to check out the other episodes!
Cute ^^
It was cute. i liked it. Would have liked to actually see an ending--rather than just a cliff hanger. I felt like I just sat through the whole thing for nothing--coupled with the fact that I had to watch a game of checkers rather than play it, doesn't make one of my best experiences of the day. Still though, nice attention to detail, consistent work, smooth animation. Very nice indeed!
Another gem
I love your work!
Exploitive journalism is the key to a great society. I can't wait until the next installment.
Most original thing I've seen on NG yet
Perfect fusion of video and flash. Great style. I can't wait till more people see this on the frontpage. Good on you!
Yeah, I'm all for this
The weakest area was the sound department. voice actor mumbling--speaking to fast, and muddled music sq in teh background but it had a very distinct snes of style to it. I'd suggest not drawing mouths but editing your own sprite mouths in any next installments. Also, try to work more with lip synching. this is all just constructive critism to what I thought to be an excellent flash. :)
Heh, I CAN do lip synching, I just got lazy and decided not to, since this was really mostly an experiment, I decided not to bother too much on lip-synching.
Improvement!
I remember seeing the soundless one of just the boy skating. You added as story, sound and better backgrounds--you're improving. That already puts you ahead of a lot of other authors on this site.
Thanks!
Great job, here's some thoughts
I gave you a five, and to save you a long spichel on how well done the movie is, I thought you might appreciate some constructive critisim too.
The animation of the characters were fairly choppy--if the character models were a bit more detailed, then this wouldn't be as evident. But I knew you purposely attempted to keep the character design simple--but that only makes the poor transitions between animated stances more evident.
Moreover, I the fight scene left something more to be desired. I never really feel as if the Superhero was in any danger--and would eventually win, which was slightly dissapointing because the villian was presented in a way that made him seem more human than the protagonist. Here we saw a man who had been defeated and would strive to any means necessary to achieve victory only to be shut down, once again, by a cocky young man. Storyline in a nutshell.
Still though, the style was good and it was a well executed film. You really did a good job and you're only bound to get better as you go. This will probably even get frontpage. ^^
Thanx, I know the animation will run smoother as I do it more often. and I am glad you got the point of the unfaifness of this villians situation :)
Coolies
I look forward to seeing the future journal updates. I'm really impressed by the graphics--not by the sound. Moreover, it wouldn't hurt to embelish your life as... *shurgz... most are pretty boring.
Unless if your Christopher Walkin or something. But still--nice work.
master19086 is a wanker
I actually laughed at this--excellent work splicing two very different toons together.
Skaijo
Hey, you were the guy who reviewed my piece!
Wonderful work--I appreciate the subtle yet high-quality aspect of the animation. The detail was superb, and I assume that you did the voice acting?
Wonderful work, Professor.
I only read 10 reviews. xD If you have a honest issue about my work, you're taking me too seriously.
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Superwoman
...is hard.
Korea / USA
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