Has potential
The sound quality needs work. There's too much fuzz in the background and the voice itself is speaking much too fast and plainly. A bit more emotion in the acting would be best. The animation itself is jumpy... and it would be nice if the character moved without having to activate him.
Replay button is also a plus.
The sounds were engineered and are devoid of sound, so it might be a local problem. I was the voice actor this time, but not the actual one, so my glaring bad acting shows. And it would be a serious compromise to the submission if I let him get frustrated over again.
I only read 10 reviews. xD If you have a honest issue about my work, you're taking me too seriously.
Age 39, Female
Superwoman
...is hard.
Korea / USA
Joined on 5/11/05
DXPIc: Azure 